Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Insecure Writer's Support Group: Wise Revisions




                                                                   

Thanks to  Alex J. Cavanaugh for hosting the second meeting of the minds. Alex began The Insecure Writer's Support Group as a forum for bloggers and authors to voice their concerns; while offering solutions, as well as lending support. Be sure to visit the vast array of talented members.


Wise Revisions 

Writing helps connect the dots,
That open worlds of wonder.
Reading in between the lines,
Turn clear skies into thunder.

Waiting for the inspiration,
Sequestered in a silent rage.
Staring at an empty screen,
Wishing words upon the page.

Suddenly the switch turns on,
While ideas churn like butter.
At last the curse is lifted,
As butterflies converge to flutter.

Plagued by second thoughts,
Weary of a cool reception.
Any hopes of turning heads,
Are fueled by misconceptions.

Regrets I have many,
Nervous twitches I have but few.
If only I had begun at twenty,
Should haves adhere to me like glue.

The phone rings, changing tones,
There's talk of staging a tour.
My hair, my shoes, what will I say?
Thank goodness, I'm not insecure. 

-Julie Kemp Pick

39 comments:

  1. I love the line, "sequestered in a silent rage."

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  2. Love your verse today! Oh those doubts and second thoughts. Sometimes we have to just push past them, and aren't we always glad when we do :)

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  3. Many regrets...many should have's. I'm with you girl.

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  4. @Isis - Thanks for the kind words!

    @Tonja - I really had fun with this one! Thanks Tonja!

    @Joanne - It just makes it all the more worthwhile! Thanks Joanne!

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  5. What a great poem! And so true, too. All I can say is, I sure hope my switch turns on. I just want to get in down "on paper." I'll worry about the revisions later.

    Thanks for stopping by and commenting today, Julie. I can always count on you and that makes me very happy!!

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  7. That says it all very nicely. Doubts and insecurities plague us. Well done!

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  8. You're so creative, Julie. I love this poem. My favorite phrase here is "silent rage". That describes the process so well.
    xoRobyn

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  9. @Alex - Thanks again for hosting! The group seems to be opening up even more this time! You bring out the beast in everyone Alex!

    @Shannon - I think this is true on so many levels! Thanks Shannon!

    @Robyn - This is a real compliment coming from the Queen of Creativity! Thanks Robyn!

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  10. Should haves are the bane of my existence. I love that you were able to create such fantastic verse, and twist those seeds of doubt into a bit of humor!

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  11. The first poem I saw today. Very clever. Thanks for something very original.

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  12. Terrific, pointed verse. All the images were very striking and fit the feeling of insecurity very well. Brilliant!

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  13. @Julie - Thank you so much! I would love to frame your comment and hang it on the wall!

    @Stephen - What I lack in experience, I try to make up for in originality! Thanks Stephen!

    @Melissa - I really appreciate your kind words! Wait a minute, are you talking to me? Thanks Melissa!

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  14. @mbj/Delores - I hope you were smiling when you wrote this! You've helped so many people that you should have absolutely no regrets!

    @Nancy - Your switch will turn on when you least expect it! Thank you for all of your support, and you're one heck of a cheerleader!

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  15. Oh, cool.. A poem!!! Very nice. (You KNOW Poet's opinion on this excellent post. :))Great way of saying what you wanted to say.

    And thank you for your kind comment on my blog. It was much appreciated! Apologies for the delay in popping over. My WIP has me whipped right now.

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  16. LOVE! Oh gosh, revisions are the worst, because of the second guessing - eep!

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  17. @Bryce - Sounds like you're really making progress with your WIP - no apologies necessary! Thank Poet for me, and I can't wait to hear more about your new project!

    @Talli - Seems like you have that department pretty well covered! With 3 book releases in such a short time, nothing ever slows you down! Thanks Talli!

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  18. I love this! These lines seem made for me:

    "Regrets I have many,
    Nervous twitches I have but few.
    If only I had begun at twenty,
    Should haves adhere to me like glue"

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  19. Wonderful poem! I love the last line the best.

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  20. Wonderful!
    My favorite stanza -
    Plagued by second thoughts,
    Weary of a cool reception.
    Any hopes of turning heads,
    Are fueled by misconceptions.

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  21. @Ann - It's funny how we both wrote about needing a light switch turned on! I really enjoyed your entry too! Thanks Ann!

    @Caitlin - I'm glad we met through the blogfest! Thanks for following me, and I look forward to seeing more of you!

    @Brianna - This poem was written about so many aspects of life; from not making the school play, to being passed over for a job promotion. It was written in the voice of a writer, but self doubt plagues everyone at one point or another. Thanks Brianna!

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  22. We do run the gamut of emotions in the writing business don't we? Eventually though, we get the job done despite our fears and misgivings. Your poem expressed all that for me. Good job.

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  23. Gotta love those "should haves." Good rhyming. That takes patience.

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  24. @JL - I really appreciate your insightful comment! Thanks JL!

    @Angela - Congratulations on your wonderful reviews! I am so thrilled for you! Thanks Angela!

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  25. What a fantastic poem! And I admit: I'm totally insecure. But shhhhh! Its a secret, don't tell anyone.

    Nice to see you doing the insecure writers thing. Me too! Guess I'll see you around more!

    P.s. New follower!

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  26. Fantastic poem. I went to a short story workshop today. This post was very fitting.

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  27. @Julie - It's nice to meet you through the blogfest! Thanks for following me and I look forward to seeing more of you too!

    @Rhonda - I'm impressed that you found the time to attend a short story workshop! Does this have something to do with your new blog? Thanks Rhonda!

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  28. Hey, new follower and fellow insecure writer here! I LOVE this poem! I'm totally going to print it out and hang it above my computer. Thanks for posting!
    Great blog!!
    - http://pensuasion.blogspot.com/

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  29. Wow, this is such a fantastic poem, Julie! I love it and I think I am going to follow S.L. and print it out, wonderful.

    I especially loved this line:

    "Should haves adhere to me like glue"

    Oh my, I can so relate to that. Beautifully done.

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  30. Well written and yes, I can identify with all that, especially the bit about wishing I'd begun at twenty!

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  31. S.L. - Thanks for the follow and I will do the same! I'm honored that you think my poem deserves such a prominent position!

    Julie - You have accomplished so much with your writing in a short time that any should haves or regrets should be wiped away. Thanks Julie!

    Rosalind - The quality of your work stands for itself at any age! Hold your head high my friend!

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  32. Wonderfully composed poem. When opportunity knocks we should be ready to shuck any excuses that are holding us back an answer the door. Sadly, many of us squander much to insecurity.


    Lee
    Tossing It Out

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  33. I actually heard something interesting the other day: There are no wrong turns in life. So there are no should haves. Everything that you've done led you to this point in your life. Sometimes it's not nice, but not everything is bad and if you had done those should haves, you would have missed out on a lot of things you cherish now.

    :-)Still, your poem is beautiful!

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  34. @Lee - It is a shame when people lose their focus and miss out on opportunities. Thanks Lee!

    @Misha - This is an interesting philosophy that encourages you to look ahead! Thanks Misha!

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  35. Hi there,
    Fantastic poem :) Thank you so much for stopping by my blog via the PIF Blogfest. It's good to "meet" you. I think your blog is great. It is a great way of meeting people in the same boat. So "hi" and I'll pop by as often as possible :)
    Eve :)

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  36. Thanks Eve, I also enjoyed your blog! I agree that blogging is a wonderful way to connect with writers from all over the world. I look forward to your next story.

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