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Children's author Susanna Leonard Hill has braved the 'Frankenstorm' to host the Halloweensie Contest. The entries must be one hundred words or less and include the words witch, bat, and "trick-or-treat." Everyone is welcome to join in through the rest of today. However, Susanna is willing to extend the deadline until Friday if anyone needs extra time due to power outages. Just let her know.
On a serious note, my thoughts and prayers go out to our East Coast friends who have had to endure the devastating path of Hurricane Sandy.
Which Witch Switch Hits?
The witch was up to bat,
She took a swing with her broom.
The ball was struck so hard,
It could have reached the moon.
The other team was outraged,
She must have cast a spell.
But she practiced hours everyday,
Surely they could tell.
Next the witch stirred a hearty brew,
And sprinkled horn of toad.
But the hex was not complete,
Without pumpkin pie ala mode.
Hence the team of trick-or-treaters,
Were transformed into a larvae of roach.
As the witch served the Bad Sport Potion,
Disguised as their disgruntled coach.
-Julie Kemp Pick
Such fun, Julie! I was thinking of using "bat" like this, too, but ended up not doing it so I'm glad you did! Very creative and entertaining - I love the Bad Sport Potion :)
ReplyDeleteVery fun! I love how the witch hit the ball with her broomstick. Most creative.
ReplyDeleteI love your title - fun to practice and hard to master!
ReplyDeleteHow creative! I love your word play! Really fun entry!
ReplyDeleteThis is great. Got to get mine posted on Youngish.
ReplyDeleteFun poem, Julie. And I love your tongue-twister title... try saying it over and over, faster and faster... he!!he!
ReplyDeleteFun, fun, fun! Super creative!
ReplyDeleteCouldn't do mine because of Sandy and her windy ways. Good luck! :-)
Super funny and clever! Caught up on a couple of your posts. I'm amazed that your husband found that lost ticket!
ReplyDeleteI love the tongue-twister title too, I was glad I could just read it and not try to say it!
ReplyDeleteVery cute and creative poem, Julie. I love Halloween so this was doubly fun to read. :)
Fun - love how you used bat and the title!
ReplyDeleteCool poem!
ReplyDelete"a larvae of roach" ... eeewwwww
Super FUN poem. Serves them right, right?
ReplyDeleteFun and creative! I love the way you used 'bat'.
ReplyDeleteThis has a Who's On First? quality and I love that the witch is the disciplinarian for bad sportsmanship! Clever.
ReplyDeleteSusanna - I really enjoyed reading your creative story and poem too! Thanks for hosting this wonderful contest Susanna, and I can't wait to read all of the entries!
ReplyDeleteCatherine - Talk about creative! I just read your witty, and wonderful vlog complete with costume! Thanks Catherine!
Cathy - Serves me right for coming up with it in the wee hours! Thanks Cathy!
Penny - It is fun to play with words! Thanks Penny!
Delores - I can't wait to read it Delores, and thank you!
Michelle - Better not or I'll get dizzy! Thanks Michelle!
Robyn - I hope that you're doing okay, and that you didn't get too much damage. Susanna did say that she would extend the deadline if you're interested. Thanks Robyn!
Mary - Thanks for taking time out to read two posts! We were both surprised that he was able to find it! Thanks again Mary!
Julie - Thanks so much, and have a Happy Halloween! Is Clancy dressing up?
Thanks Julie!
Carol - Not many options to rhyme with coach. Uh oh I just thought of a few more...never mind! Thanks Carol!
nrhatch - Hey, I tried to incorporate a lesson! Thanks nrhatch!
Special Note - I just took a quick peak at Catherine's, and can't wait to read all of the other entries! I will comment directly on your blogs. Happy Halloween to everyone! Julie
oops...peek not peak! I took a peek at the entries, but I'm not at the peak of my game!
DeleteThanks Heather!
ReplyDeleteLaura - Well, she tried to be a good witch! Thanks Laura!
Hehe! What a great poem - perfect ending, if somewhat disgusting. :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent word play.
ReplyDeleteHa! Love it. That was a great poem for Halloween!
ReplyDeleteTalli - As long as it's only "somewhat!" Thanks Talli!
ReplyDeleteThanks Joanna!
L.G. - I had fun writing it! Thanks L.G.!
Julie
Great poem! Happy Halloween.
ReplyDeleteThat was very clever! They deserved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gail, and Happy Halloween to you!
ReplyDeleteAlex - I know that you would never want them in your army! Thanks Alex!
Julie
Hi, Julie! Cute poem. : )
ReplyDeleteVery cute play on words
ReplyDeleteThanks Susanne!
ReplyDeleteHeather - Since I'm too old to go trick-or-treating, it's fun to play with words instead! Thanks Heather!
Julie
:) I will be awarding you with the Top Commenter award on my blog tomorrow. Have a great weekend
DeleteThanks so much Heather! It was so nice of you to think of me! I'll see you tomorrow! Julie
DeleteI enjoyed your poem! Ick - larvae of roach...this made me shiver! Bad Sport Potion sounds like bad news to me :)
ReplyDeleteOMG, that was adorable! Bad Sport Potion. :)
ReplyDeleteJanna - Sorry but she was only trying to teach them a lesson! Thanks Janna!
ReplyDeleteLibby - Good sportsmanship is tantamount to the team! Thanks Libby!
Julie
Ha--Bad Sport Potion! I love it!! I'd love to serve some up on occasion, too!
ReplyDeleteHi Julie,
ReplyDeleteWhich witch is on first on Who's on second. What a bewitching ball game. A delightful poem. I've heard beginner witches um 'fly off the handle..'
Carla - It would be fun to serve to kids of all ages! Thanks Carla!
ReplyDeleteGary - Oh you would be so good at this Gary! "Fly off the handle," would've fit in perfectly! Thanks Gary!
Julie
I'm still laughing about this bit: "But the hex was not complete, Without pumpkin pie ala mode." That's one smart witch.
ReplyDeleteYour poems are always fun and clever, Julie. I hope it was a happy Halloween.
xoRobyn
What fun, Julie! So lovely to meet you via Susanna's Halloweensie contest! Your tongue-twisting title is fantastic...and I adore the pumpkin pie ala mode...is that what you are serving for dessert? I'll be right over. :)
ReplyDeleteHa,ha,ha. This is so appropriate for me since me and my family have been having baseball fever. Lots of fun and surprises. Love the disgruntled coach.
ReplyDeleteRobyn - I also loved reading your decadent Halloween treat! Now that was CLEVER! Thanks Robyn!
ReplyDeleteVivian - Sorry we'll be having leftover Halloween candy for dessert instead, but you're still invited! It's nice to meet you too, and I hope to see more of you! Thanks Vivian!
Romelle - My husband and boys are huge baseball fans too, and happily they are good sports! Thanks Romelle!
Julie
Very clever!
ReplyDeleteLOL... great word play in the title. A laugh a minute, this one.
ReplyDeleteSo clever, Julie. Love the play on words & the larvae of roach!
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan!
ReplyDeletePatient Dreamer - Thanks for making my day! I really enjoyed reading your blog too!
Patricia - Not a pretty picture, but at least it rhymes with coach! Thanks Patricia!
Julie
Cute poem! Good job, kiddo.
ReplyDeleteThanks funny lady!
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